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    <p>Thanks for the feedback Rahul,</p>
    <p>Would you mind adding your comment into the text of the document
      (It is easier for me to collate comments, and also allows other
      reviewers to see your comments).</p>
    <p>I've provided you with review access:</p>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 5/3/18 2:36 pm, Rahul Soshte wrote:<br>
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            <div>Hi Cameron,<br>
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            A suggestion would be be to add the point of process of 
            making of the Laws of a country(Editing the book of rules of
            Law governing the country) collaborative.By that way the
            Laws would be consistently and approriate to the changing
            times.For example in India,some laws made before
            independence by the British are still prevalent today and I
            presume the same has happened with any other country which
            was under foreign rule for a long time.So a collaborative
            law making process would be more better than a limited set
            of contributors chosen by the government  themselves.<br>
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        <div>Regards,<br>
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        <div>Rahul Soshte<br>
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        <div class="gmail_quote">On Mon, Mar 5, 2018 at 2:57 AM, Cameron
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            .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Folks,<br>
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            Thanks to those of you who have reviewed the response to the
            proposed Open Government National Action Plan. And I know a
            number of you are planning to add more feedback this week.
            (In a nutshell: The response explains Open Government needs
            to learn how to collaborate as effectively as Open Source
            communities, and what government needs to change to make
            this happen).<br>
            <br>
            OSIA folks and Linux Australia Council, I'm formally
            requesting that this letter be presented jointly by Open
            Source Industry Australia (OSIA) and Linux Australia. What
            is involved in getting this permission?<br>
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            A status update:<br>
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            * The Linux Journal has offered to publish a piece on this.
            I'll be reaching out to other publications in the next
            couple of weeks to invite them to publish too. (Suggestions
            of publications welcomed).<br>
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            * I've incorporated most changes suggested so far. I've had
            a couple of people suggest a better introduction / exec
            summary - which I'll be working on.<br>
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            * I'm hoping to collate all preliminary feedback within the
            next 2 weeks (by ~ 16 March).<br>
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            * Deadline for delivery of our response is 30 March.<br>
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            Document is here:<br>
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            Warm regards, Cameron
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                On 27/2/18 8:52 am, Cameron Shorter wrote:<br>
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                  The Australian Government has asked for feedback on
                  how they are going at Open Government, and I've
                  started a draft response. I'm really keen to make sure
                  that this response is well constructed because I think
                  that if listened to, understood, and acted upon, then
                  we can make a huge difference to the effectiveness of
                  Open Government worldwide - and by extension, to Open
                  Source as well.<br>
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                  If you have a chance to read and provide review
                  comments, I'd be very grateful. Email me directly to
                  get review access.<br>
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                  (It will take ~ 10 minutes to read. Longer if you take
                  time to think about how things should be reworded and
                  consider what is missing and should be included.)<br>
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                -- <br>
                Cameron Shorter<br>
                Technology Demystifier, Learnosity<br>
                Open Technologies Consultant<br>
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