[FOSS4G2019] Community sprint mail

[Tõnis Kärdi]

Luca, couple of things that caught my eye:

> the FOSS4G 2019 Community Sprint [1] will be right after the global FOSS4G
> conference [2] and has the aim to bring people together.
[..]
> Our aim is to bring together project members to discuss and improve
> their and other projects.

Maybe somehow reword one or the other because of the repetition.
Something in the line of

"""
the FOSS4G 2019 Community Sprint [1] will be right after the global FOSS4G
conference and will be your chance to share ideas with the teams, and
to discuss and improve different OSGeo projects. We follow this
tradition since 2009.

The Sprint will take place ...
"""

And then drop the later "Our aim is to .." sentence altogether?

> It offers a great opportunity to meet other OSGeo member and get [..]

member should be plural? And maybe without "other" aswell because it's
not only OSGeo members to OSGeo members but open to anybody
interested. :)

Otherwise looks good to me (y)!

All the best,
tõnis

Kontakt Luca Delucchi (<lucadeluge at gmail.com>) kirjutas kuupäeval P,
7. aprill 2019 kell 03:34:
>
> Hi all,
>
> I prepared a draft of email to send to osgeo mailing list (and other
> channels you think are useful).
>
> Please review it
>
> ======
>
> Hello,
>
> the FOSS4G 2019 Community Sprint [1] will be right after the global FOSS4G
> conference [2] and has the aim to bring people together.
>
> The Sprint will take place Saturday 31 August 2019
> in the University of Bucharest at Faculty of Geography [3] from 9AM
> - 18PM.
>
> It offers a great opportunity to meet other OSGeo member and get
> involved in the projects! The Community Sprint is an opportunity for
> developers and non developers to meet with the core team of the projects,
> get a deeper insight into the software and participate in development,
> testing or documentation.
>
> Our aim is to bring together project members to discuss and improve
> their and other projects.We follow this tradition since 2009.
>
> The OSGeo Code Sprint is open to all who wish to participate in one or
> more projects. There is always plenty to do – it’s not all about
> programming. Translation, documentation, feedback, discussions, testing
> – all this is also important for projects so everyone is cordially
> invited to attend the codesprint!
>
> The Organizing Team is looking forward to your coming!
>
> Please register soon (important for better planning) [1]
>
> See you at FOSS4G 2019!
>
> The FOSS4G 2019 Community Sprint Team
>
>
> [1] https://wiki.osgeo.org/wiki/FOSS4G_2019_Community_Sprint
> [2] http://2019.foss4g.org/
> [3] https://en.unibuc.ro/academic-programmes/faculties/faculty-of-geography/
>
> ======
>
> --
> ciao
> Luca
>
> www.lucadelu.org
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