[Journal] Update on Volume 11

[Eli Adam]

On Tue, Oct 23, 2012 at 7:41 AM, Landon Blake
<sunburned.surveyor at gmail.com>wrote:

> Eli:
>
> Thank you for all of the review and copy editing. Your doing a great
> job and I really appreciate the help.
>
> You wrote: "I have reviewed this with minor corrections,
> http://trac.osgeo.org/osgeo/changeset/9210.  "5) Non-Spatial
> Relationships" needs to be added to the Structural elements of a GIS
> data model box to match the earlier list."
>
> Did you already commit this change? If not, please do so.
>
>
I committed most of the changes and the link shows the changeset so you can
see the exact diff.

I did not add to the Structural Elements of a GIS Data Model box because I
can't get my Inkscape to not change font and other minor aspects which will
then make the box not match the other boxes.  Until I can get my Inkscape
output to match yours, I will need to pass all svg edits to you.


> You wrote: "I think that the annotated included entity diagram and
> simple feature type attribute diagram are very useful whereas the last
> two (particularly rotated) are less useful and certainly appear less
> integral to the article."
>
> I will delete the last two diagrams and will add links to them instead.
>
> You wrote: "Very minor corrections,
> http://trac.osgeo.org/osgeo/changeset/9212"
>
> Have you already committed the changes to the editorial? If not, please do
> so.
>
>
Yes, all done.  The link shows the details if you want to know (and I like
people knowing what changes are happening so that they can svn update and
review them if they want).

Bests, Eli


> Thanks!
>
> Landon
>
> PS - In the future, if you have minor edits, please commit them. I
> trust your judgement.
>
>
>
> On Mon, Oct 22, 2012 at 11:31 PM, Eli Adam <eadam at co.lincoln.or.us> wrote:
> > On Mon, Oct 22, 2012 at 4:54 PM, Landon Blake <
> sunburned.surveyor at gmail.com>
> > wrote:
> >>
> >> I made some major progress on Volume 11 today, which included
> >> addressing (I hope) all of Eli's review comments and e-mails. I also
> >> accomplished the following:
> >>
> >> - Created front and back covers.
> >> - Renumbered pages.
> >> - Fixed headers and footers.
> >> - Created the editorial.
> >> - Completed the topical article.
> >> - Completed the case study article.
> >> - Created the table of contents.
> >>
> >> This means the following are available for review:
> >>
> >> - The case study. (Applying OpenJUMP to the Management of Sanitary
> >> Sewer Networks)
> >> - The topical article. (Sharing GIS Data Models)
> >
> >
> > I have reviewed this with minor corrections,
> > http://trac.osgeo.org/osgeo/changeset/9210.  "5) Non-Spatial
> Relationships"
> > needs to be added to the Structural elements of a GIS data model box to
> > match the earlier list.  I think that the annotated included entity
> diagram
> > and simple feature type attribute diagram are very useful whereas the
> last
> > two (particularly rotated) are less useful and certainly appear less
> > integral to the article.
> >
> >>
> >> - The editorial.
> >
> >
> > Very minor corrections, http://trac.osgeo.org/osgeo/changeset/9212
> >
> >>
> >> Here is what I will be working on tomorrow:
> >> - Complete the article introducing the SurveyOS Project KML Toolkit.
> >> - Complete the Editor's Footnote entitled "Do we need a journal?"
> >>
> >> If I can finish both of these tomorrow, we can get our final review of
> >> the master PDF in Wednesday and Thursday. We can then publish Volume
> >> 11 on Friday.
> >>
> >
> > I'd like this journal release to be more definitive and with more fanfare
> > than the last volume.  Also, if someone other than Landon or me  would
> read
> > the final, that could be helpful since after reading it 5 times the
> critical
> > eye is perhaps impaired.
> >
> > Eli
> >
> >> If that happens, I'll work on an HTML version of a selection of some
> >> of the articles next week. I'd like to post these on the Journal blog
> >> and make them available in an edition for Google Currents.
> >>
> >> Landon
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> >
> >
>
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