[Journal] 2012 Annual Report

[Landon Blake]

Thanks for another check Eli. I'll see if I can make time to button up
these edits this coming week.

Landon

On Mon, Nov 30, 2015 at 5:39 PM, Eli Adam <eadam at co.lincoln.or.us> wrote:

> Hey Landon,
>
> On Mon, Nov 30, 2015 at 4:35 PM, Landon Blake
> <sunburned.surveyor at gmail.com> wrote:
> > Eli:
> >
> > I made an SVN commit. I'm not sure how many of my changes got through
> > because my working copy was out of date, but it looks like the only
> conflict
> > was with the Romanian Chapter. I'll see if I can get that conflict
> resolved
> > and then I'll look at your other comments. I'll try to do this before the
> > end of the work week.
>
> Thanks for the commit.  I made and committed a few minor fixes,
> https://trac.osgeo.org/osgeo/changeset/12602/
>
> The page number 27 is bold and black instead of small and green (at
> least in the PDF).
>
> Once you think that we are close and update the master PDF, let me
> know and I'll run through all the copy editing steps, including spell
> check.  http://wiki.osgeo.org/wiki/Copy_Editing
>
> Looks good!  Thanks for working on it.  I'm looking forward to completing
> it.
>
> Best regards, Eli
>
> >
> > Landon
> >
> > On Mon, Nov 30, 2015 at 11:27 AM, Eli Adam <eadam at co.lincoln.or.us>
> wrote:
> >>
> >> On Sat, Nov 28, 2015 at 1:37 PM, Landon Blake
> >> <sunburned.surveyor at gmail.com> wrote:
> >> > Eli asked me to wrap up the final edits to the 2012 Annual Report.
> Here
> >> > are
> >> > his comments and my changes:
> >>
> >> The first comment was that I fixed many minor things in svn in
> >> revision https://trac.osgeo.org/osgeo/changeset/11997/.  I don't see
> >> those changes reflected in this most recent attachment.  I also don't
> >> see any of your updates in svn.  I'm under the impression that we are
> >> collaboratively working on Journal development just like source code
> >> so we would svn update, then make changes, then svn commit.  Seeing
> >> diffs also makes it easier to see what changes have been made rather
> >> than trying to look at everything again.
> >>
> >> The rest of these comments were things that I couldn't fix myself in
> >> the sources.
> >>
> >> >
> >> > 1. Almost no urls are linked.  I don't know if urls are supposed to be
> >> > blue hyperlinks or not.  If they are not, then they should be spelled
> >> > out (which might help rather than hiding them anyway)
> >> >
> >> > The attached copy doesn't have any hyperlinks. Hopefully that will
> solve
> >> > this problem.
> >>
> >> Looks good.
> >>
> >> >
> >> > 2. Landon can you review the first paragraph of the editorial and
> >> > double check year (2014 vs 2012), the sentence that says 4 is an
> >> > increase from 4, and decide if you really want to spell and
> >> > parenthesis numbers -- four (4)?
> >> >
> >> > This has been fixed.
> >>
> >> Looks mostly good.  If it were in svn, I would change "2" to "two" for
> >> consistency in the first paragraph.
> >>
> >> >
> >> > 3. The Australia/New Zealand Report says "We need this content" - get
> >> > content of delete.
> >> >
> >> > This has been fixed.
> >>
> >> It seems to still be there.  Maybe the pdf didn't get regenerated for
> >> this report.
> >>
> >> >
> >> > 4. The Francophone Chapter is missing a map.
> >> >
> >> > I had a map previously, but the chapter asked for its removal. This
> is a
> >> > language chapter rather than a country specific chapter. :]
> >>
> >> I see, now I know.
> >>
> >> >
> >> > 5. The Romanian Chapter has six things that should be urls that say,
> >> > "can be found here" and don't appear to have link information
> >> >
> >> > Couldn't find this problem, but I fixed some other layout errors.
> >>
> >> Check page 37 and 38. Try searching for "can be found here".
> >>
> >> >
> >> > 6. The Incubation Report seems to contain an entire section on the
> >> > ICA-OSGeo Lab Network.  I don't see that as in the realm of the
> >> > Incubation Committee and question whether the Incubation Committee
> >> > should be reporting on that (or if the Journal should be presenting
> >> > the ICA-OSGeo Lab Network as part of the Incubation Committee work).
> >> > I would welcome the ICA-OSGeo Lab Network having their own report and
> >> > section.
> >> >
> >> > Fixed. I think this was a copy/paste error on my part.
> >>
> >> This now appears to be the correct report.  Once the sources are in
> >> svn, I'll review and copy edit it.
> >>
> >> Thanks for the revisions.
> >>
> >> Eli
> >>
> >>
> >> >
> >> > Please review the attached and let me know if other changes are
> needed.
> >> >
> >> > Thanks!
> >> >
> >> > Landon
> >> >
> >> >
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