[GRASS-dev] GRASS flyer for the new osgeo branding

[Luca Delucchi]

On 27 July 2017 at 18:47, Jeff McKenna <jmckenna at gatewaygeomatics.com> wrote:
> Hi Luca,
>

Hi Jeff

> Some feedback from me:
>
> - remove "a" from the first sentence:   GRASS GIS is free and open source
> software for performing spatial analysis.
>
> - add an "s" to "consist" in the second sentence:  It consists of more than
> 450 modules
>

both done

> - in the third sentence, the term "map web services" confuses me, did you
> mean "web map services" instead??
>

yes, solved

> - in the next sentence, change "but still at the bleeding edge" to "but is
> still at the bleeding edge"
>

done, maybe should be "but it is still at the bleeding edge" ?

> - in the section "A long term endeavor":
>
>    - change "wide contributors community. Both combine" to "wide
> contributors community; both combine"
>

done

> - in the section "Interfaces":
>
>    - change "the simpler for new user" to "the simplest for the new user"
>
>    - change "text based" to "text-based"
>

done

Thanks a lot for the review

>
> -jeff
>


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ciao
Luca

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