[GRASSweb-list]scott: web/community get_involved.inc,1.3,1.4

[grass at intevation.de]

Author: scott

Update of /grassrepository/web/community
In directory doto:/tmp/cvs-serv31845

Modified Files:
	get_involved.inc 
Log Message:
various typographical and English improvements

Index: get_involved.inc
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RCS file: /grassrepository/web/community/get_involved.inc,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -d -r1.3 -r1.4
--- get_involved.inc	19 Apr 2005 13:45:12 -0000	1.3
+++ get_involved.inc	19 Apr 2005 13:54:27 -0000	1.4
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 <a href="http://intevation.de/rt/webrt?q_sort=area&q_reverse=1&q_queue=grass>projects"</a>
 and feature requests. Just pick a task from the list. It may be a good idea to
 send a small posting to a related <a href="support.php">GRASS mailing list</a> to
-announce you activities (maybe someone will join you!).
+announce your activities (maybe someone will join you!).
 </p>
 
 <h3>C Programming</h3>
@@ -22,12 +22,12 @@
 
 <h3>Writing/Updating/Improving documentation</h3>
 If you see manual pages or other documents which are outdated, grammatically
-incorrect, to short, lacking examples, please don't hesitate to send <b>text pieces</b>
+incorrect, too short, lacking examples, etc. please don't hesitate to send revised <b>text segments</b>
 (preferably in HTML) to one of the developers or the related mailing list.
 
 <p> Also <b>updates to the web pages</b> are welcome. Just use the contact address at
 bottom or our <a href="../bugtracking/bugreport.html">bugtracking system</a>. Please consider
-to send text pieces rather than general statements to speed up the update process.
+sending actual segments of corrected or new text, rather than general statements, to speed up the update process.
 </p>
 
 <h3>Translating GRASS: i18N</h3>
@@ -37,8 +37,8 @@
 
 <h3>Funding</h3>
 If you find GRASS useful, consider <a href="commercial.php">providing
-additional fundings</a> to continue its development. Even a modest amount of
-additional fundings could make a significant difference in the amount of time
+additional funding</a> to continue its development. Even a modest amount of
+additional funding could make a significant difference in the amount of time
 that its author can devote to development and support.</p>
 
 <h3>Other contributions</h3>