[GRASSweb-list] scott: web/announces announce_grass610.html, 1.19, 1.20

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Author: scott

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--- announce_grass610.html	15 Jul 2006 12:30:29 -0000	1.19
+++ announce_grass610.html	16 Jul 2006 17:19:55 -0000	1.20
@@ -44,8 +44,8 @@
 
 
 <P>
-Joining GRASS's well developed raster engine, GRASS 6 introduced a new topological
-2D/3D vector engine including support for vector network analysis with attributes
+Building on GRASS's already well developed raster engine, GRASS 6 introduced a new topological
+2D/3D vector engine including support for vector network analysis, with attributes
 managed in an SQL-based DBMS. Integration and functionality of these engines have
 been improved with this new release, and 3D raster (voxel) support has been
 greatly enhanced with a number of new gridded volume analysis and support modules.
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
 GUI display manager has been improved and retained for legacy support.
 
 The NVIZ visualization tool has been enhanced to display 3D vector data
-and voxel volumes and create on-the-fly MPEG animations.
+and voxel volumes, and create on-the-fly MPEG animations.
 Messages are substantially translated (i18N) with support for
 FreeType fonts, including multibyte Asian characters. New project locations can
 be auto-generated by EPSG code number or directly from input data files.
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
 range of raster and vector formats, including OGC-conformal Simple Features, and
 uses the popular PROJ.4 software library to include support for most known map
 projections and to allow easy definition of new or rare map projections via custom
-parametrization.
+parameterization.
 
 <P>
 This is the first release of GRASS as a founding project of the new