[VisCom] OSGeo Ad - last look by noon
tylermitchell at shaw.ca
Mon May 22 15:02:16 EDT 2006
This web mail client isn't very good - resending last note.
Hi Peter, thanks for the update.
I'd rather not keep loading that first sentence. You could instead get 'geospatial' into the second sentence to side-step the redundancy.
"Our projects represent the highest quality of open, shared resources..."
"Our geospatial projects represent the highest quality of open, shared resources..."
What do you think? Otherwise, I don't mind your change but just feel the first sentence is pretty long and loaded already.
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