[VisCom] OSGeo Flyer for Where 2.0 - review by Friday noon PST

[Peter Moran]

Good to go. Thanks for assimilating comments Tyler.  I'll send to
production resource and ask for one more look this afternoon if
possible.  Also will request softcopy files for Tyler, and see if they
can templatize the ad for use as flyer backbone.

Peter

-----Original Message-----
From: Tyler Mitchell (External) 
Sent: Friday, May 19, 2006 11:50 AM
To: dev at visibilitycommittee.osgeo.org; Peter Moran
Subject: Re: [VisCom] OSGeo Flyer for Where 2.0 - review by Friday noon
PST

So, to sum up Michael's suggestions...

>[1] The Open Source Geospatial Foundation is a not-for-profit
>organization dedicated to the collaborative development of
>technologies and data.

>[3] Our projects represent the highest quality of open, shared
>resources -- Code from low-level libraries to high-level
>servers, Content from map data to educational curriculum.

>[4] We are developers and executives, authors and educators,
>users and marketers.

>[2b] We're a community that provides financial, organizational,
>and legal support to the open source geospatial community.

>[5d] Join us at www.osgeo.org.  Together, we'll open our world.

I like this, with only one word change. Change last (redundant)
"community" to 
"projects" in [2b].  Also in [3] lower case the "Code" and "Content"?
This 
would make the whole thing read:

"
The Open Source Geospatial Foundation is a not-for-profit
organization dedicated to the collaborative development of
technologies and data.

Our projects represent the highest quality of open, shared
resources -- code from low-level libraries to high-level
servers, content from map data to educational curriculum.

We are developers and executives, authors and educators,
users and marketers.

We're a community that provides financial, organizational,
and legal support to the open source geospatial community.

Join us at www.osgeo.org.  Together, we'll open our world.
"


Nice job guys.  Good to go?
Tyler