[VisCom] OSGeo Ad - last look by noon

[Tyler Mitchell]

Thanks Peter, sounds good.  I agree, we've got lots done :)

Tyler

----- Original Message -----
From: Peter Moran <peter.moran at autodesk.com>
Date: Monday, May 22, 2006 12:25 pm
Subject: RE: [VisCom] OSGeo Ad - last look by noon

> Sorry Tyler, I sent in final approval just a minute before I got your
> note.  So first sentence will include "...collaborative 
> development of
> geospatial technologies and data."
> 
> This is rev 1.0.  I think we've done pretty well in a short timeframe.
> I'm sure we'll get some feedback once the ad hits.  We can refine for
> rev 2.0 or the flyer.
> 
> I will also try to get a couple hundred copies of this ad for use 
> as a
> handout.  Also pdf for the library on the web site.
> 
> Peter
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Tyler Mitchell (External) 
> Sent: Monday, May 22, 2006 12:02 PM
> To: dev at visibilitycommittee.osgeo.org
> Subject: Re: [VisCom] OSGeo Ad - last look by noon
> 
> This web mail client isn't very good - resending last note.
> ---
> 
> Hi Peter, thanks for the update.
> I'd rather not keep loading that first sentence.  You could 
> instead get
> 'geospatial' into the second sentence to side-step the redundancy.
> 
> i.e. change:
> "Our projects represent the highest quality of open, shared
> resources..."
> 
> to:
> "Our geospatial projects represent the highest quality of open, shared
> resources..."
> 
> What do you think?  Otherwise, I don't mind your change but just feel
> the first sentence is pretty long and loaded already.
> 
> Tyler
> 
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