[Live-demo] Uploading overview and quickstart for TileMill

[Cameron Shorter]

Javi,
Take two of the TileMill Project Overview review is complete. I've 
removed comments, and only applied some minor tweaks to the text.

Still outstanding:
* The TileMill logo needs a little work. The text and white space (top 
and bottom) should be removed. It would be worth trying to find the 
original artist if you can. Ideally see if you can get a svg version of 
the logo.
http://wiki.osgeo.org/wiki/Live_GIS_Add_Project#Logo

* The main screen shot is too small. Could you please create something 
bigger.
http://wiki.osgeo.org/wiki/Live_GIS_Add_Project#Screen_Shot

On 16/01/13 06:40, Javi Sanchez wrote:
> Hi Cameron,
>
> Thank you for the review.
>
> I've already commited a new versión with my feed-back following your 
> comments, with my initials (js:...).
>
> I have a slight doubt about OGC Standards as well, but the overview 
> was reviewed by Dane last week, so I would say we are pretty sure 
> about the supported standards issue.... Quick start has not been 
> reviewed by Dane yet...
>
> thanks,
>
> Javi Sánchez.
>
>
> El 15/01/13 12:29, Cameron Shorter escribió:
>> Javi,
>> Thanks for your first draft of the Project Overview.
>>
>> I've had a first pass of reviewing the TileMill project overview and 
>> committed to svn.
>> I've restructured some of the text, and added a few comments which 
>> I'm hoping that you will look at. (Search for "Review Comment").
>> My adjustments to the text were to put a stronger focus on the user 
>> experience, then talk about technology, rather than the other way 
>> around.
>>
>> Could you please have a look and let me know what you think. Feel 
>> free to make updates as you see fit.
>>
>> On 14/01/13 02:51, Javi Sanchez wrote:
>>> Hi,
>>>
>>> I am on the way to include overview and quickstart for TileMill, and 
>>> not sure how to go on.
>>>
>>> What I've already done in svn is:
>>>
>>> - commited logo
>>> - commited screenshots
>>> - commitied rst files to trunk
>>> https://svn.osgeo.org/osgeo/livedvd/gisvm/trunk/doc/en/quickstart/tilemill_quickstart.rst 
>>>
>>> https://svn.osgeo.org/osgeo/livedvd/gisvm/trunk/doc/en/overview/tilemill_overview.rst 
>>>
>>>
>>> What are next steps?
>>> How can these files be included in sphinxs TOC, so the new documents 
>>> appear in the index, and I can debug in my local environment?
>>>
>>> Thanks,
>>>
>>> Javi Sánchez.
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>>
>


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