[VisCom] OSGeo Flyer for Where 2.0 - review by Friday noon PST
Tyler Mitchell
tylermitchell at shaw.ca
Fri May 19 14:49:48 EDT 2006
So, to sum up Michael's suggestions...
>[1] The Open Source Geospatial Foundation is a not-for-profit
>organization dedicated to the collaborative development of
>technologies and data.
>[3] Our projects represent the highest quality of open, shared
>resources -- Code from low-level libraries to high-level
>servers, Content from map data to educational curriculum.
>[4] We are developers and executives, authors and educators,
>users and marketers.
>[2b] We're a community that provides financial, organizational,
>and legal support to the open source geospatial community.
>[5d] Join us at www.osgeo.org. Together, we'll open our world.
I like this, with only one word change. Change last (redundant) "community" to
"projects" in [2b]. Also in [3] lower case the "Code" and "Content"? This
would make the whole thing read:
"
The Open Source Geospatial Foundation is a not-for-profit
organization dedicated to the collaborative development of
technologies and data.
Our projects represent the highest quality of open, shared
resources -- code from low-level libraries to high-level
servers, content from map data to educational curriculum.
We are developers and executives, authors and educators,
users and marketers.
We're a community that provides financial, organizational,
and legal support to the open source geospatial community.
Join us at www.osgeo.org. Together, we'll open our world.
"
Nice job guys. Good to go?
Tyler
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