[Live-demo] Review of Cartaro Project Overview

[Patric Hafner | geOps]

Hi Cameron,

Am 13.01.2013 12:28, schrieb Cameron Shorter:

> Thanks Patric,
> I've reviewed the Cartaro Project Overview and committed changes back
> into subversion.
> I've reworded a few things, and attempted to reduce the number of words
> used. I work on the principle of "less words get read more".
> 
> Could you please check my updates and ensure they look ok.
> Feel free to correct the text if feel it is required.

Thank you for reviewing. We welcome your changes and accept them.

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With best regards,

Patric Hafner

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