[postgis-tickets] r14813 - Correction from Will

[Regina Obe]

Author: robe
Date: 2016-03-29 09:25:26 -0700 (Tue, 29 Mar 2016)
New Revision: 14813

Modified:
   web/_content/posts/2016/03-29_plenario_uccd.html
Log:
Correction from Will

Modified: web/_content/posts/2016/03-29_plenario_uccd.html
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--- web/_content/posts/2016/03-29_plenario_uccd.html	2016-03-29 14:51:46 UTC (rev 14812)
+++ web/_content/posts/2016/03-29_plenario_uccd.html	2016-03-29 16:25:26 UTC (rev 14813)
@@ -14,7 +14,8 @@
 
 # What is Plenario?
 
-Over the last four years, government agencies have published more and more of their data on open data portals. However, someone interested in knowing all of the data available about a particular area they’re interested in might have to dig through the websites of their city, county, state, and federal governments to bring together all the datasets they need. 
+Over the last four years, government agencies have published more and more of their data on open data portals. 
+However, someone who wants to survey all of the data available for their city might have to dig through the websites of their city, county, state, and federal governments to bring together all the datasets they need. 
 
 Plenario collects datasets from disparate sources and lets users find all data available for their area of interest with a single spatial query. In addition to aiding data discovery, Plenario can offload some data preparation work by applying filters and aggregates to data before delivering it to the user.