[VisCom] OSGeo Flyer for Where 2.0 - review by Friday noon PST

Tyler Mitchell tylermitchell at shaw.ca
Fri May 19 14:49:48 EDT 2006


So, to sum up Michael's suggestions...

>[1] The Open Source Geospatial Foundation is a not-for-profit
>organization dedicated to the collaborative development of
>technologies and data.

>[3] Our projects represent the highest quality of open, shared
>resources -- Code from low-level libraries to high-level
>servers, Content from map data to educational curriculum.

>[4] We are developers and executives, authors and educators,
>users and marketers.

>[2b] We're a community that provides financial, organizational,
>and legal support to the open source geospatial community.

>[5d] Join us at www.osgeo.org.  Together, we'll open our world.

I like this, with only one word change. Change last (redundant) "community" to 
"projects" in [2b].  Also in [3] lower case the "Code" and "Content"?  This 
would make the whole thing read:

"
The Open Source Geospatial Foundation is a not-for-profit
organization dedicated to the collaborative development of
technologies and data.

Our projects represent the highest quality of open, shared
resources -- code from low-level libraries to high-level
servers, content from map data to educational curriculum.

We are developers and executives, authors and educators,
users and marketers.

We're a community that provides financial, organizational,
and legal support to the open source geospatial community.

Join us at www.osgeo.org.  Together, we'll open our world.
"


Nice job guys.  Good to go?
Tyler




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